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Jan. 16th, 2009

  • 9:59 AM
Alright, new years resolution to post something, anything written at least once a month. 

Future projects:

Finish NPL (just wrap it up within one chapter. To give it closure. I'm never going to finish it like I had wanted to)

Begin a new chapter story based on greek mythology

Begin posting a art/story project with my SO, she draws something and I write a ficlet for it.  The first should be done soon.

We'll see how long this new year resolution lasts.
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Dec. 13th, 2007

  • 7:28 AM
   1st Point: The comic starts with Dean picking Lex up. I already sort
of have that planned out, like the first page panel 1 is Lex on the
side of the road, the second is Dean pulling over, the third would be
Dean asking where Lex is headed and Lex just shrugs and says where
ever and Dean tells him to get in. You can change this if you want if
you've got some spicier diolog that could work there.


I travel not to go anywhere, but to go.  I travel for travel's sake.  The great affair is to move.  ~Robert Louis Stevenson (he wrote Dr Jekyll & Mr. Hyde & Treasure Island)
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1st Point w/minor changes: The comic starts with Dean picking Lex up. 

The first page panel 1 is Lex on the side of the road, 
2nd: Dean pulling over
3rd: would be Dean asks where Lex is headed.  Lex smiles just a little says "I travel not to go anywhere, but to go."
4th: Dean looks...irritated, surprised, etc "And where exactly is that?"
Lex: Wherever. *gets in car*

</end scene 1>

2nd Point: After that I'm not sure, I want to show them growing close to the point that they end up sticking together, but I have no idea how to make this happen in a short amount of time. If you have any ideas or can do some diolog showing this, this is where it'd go.

Maybe do a long montage...you could just show small silent scenes. Like Week 1: them sitting uncomfortably across from each other in a diner.  Week 4: them laughing in a diner.  Week 8: Dean giving Lex a noogie.  Week 10: Lex smirking while Dean scratching like crazy, itching powder.  Week 11: Them parked on the side of the road, Lex leaning on Dean snoring. Or something like that.  It's hard to really show a relationship transistion. 

Hmm.  THough that takes some of the fun out of it.  How do people really do a transistion like that?  I mean it's a slow buildup.  What would cause them to stick together long enough for it to happen?  I could see it happening like...you have the scene where they're uncomfortable in the restaurant and Dean is watching the news to kinda have something to do to take space up where convo would go and Lex is playing with his straw wrapper.  You could od that as a flashback Dean's having...maybe like they're in almost the same situation months later and he thinks back to how uncomfortable it was, then you flash to the present and they're laughing about some barfight Dean almost got into and how Lex talked the guy out of kicking Dean's ass.  Maybe it's like Dean really admires Lex for being able to talk them out of anything.  What do you think?
  
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Dec. 13th, 2007

  • 7:25 AM
 Just so you know Lex tells Dean his name is Alex or something, so Dean
(and the audience) doesn't actually know it's Lex Luthor. Also, the
year hasn't run out on Dean yet, but like three months into the deal
Sam ran off and Dean doesn't know where he is or what he's doing.
Sam's gone evil though, just so we all know, lol.

1st Point: The comic starts with Dean picking Lex up. I already sort
of have that planned out, like the first page panel 1 is Lex on the
side of the road, the second is Dean pulling over, the third would be
Dean asking where Lex is headed and Lex just shrugs and says where
ever and Dean tells him to get in. You can change this if you want if
you've got some spicier diolog that could work there.

2end Point: After that I'm not sure, I want to show them growing close
to the point that they end up sticking together, but I have no idea
how to make this happen in a short amount of time. If you have any
ideas or can do some diolog showing this, this is where it'd go.

2 1/2 Subpoint: I want to show Dean thinking of Sam, maybe dreaming of him.

3erd Point: This is where they're already close enough to joke around
with each other. I kind of wish there could be a short-ish plot point
to tie in the 2end and 3erd parts, to show them transitioning from
strangers to friends.

3 1/2 Subpoint: Show Dean calling Sammy's phone and getting the voice mail.

4th Point: Lex finds out that Dean is a hunter and ends up "saving
people, hunting things, the family bussiness" with Dean. You can do
this however you want.

4 1/2 Subpoint: Dean gets a phone call at some point during the above
plot, but nobodies there. And maybe Dean says, "Sammy?" and then hears
a click.

5th Point: More saving people, huntings things. Maybe they run into
Ash, whom actually survived the fire? Like he explains that he lost
his watch in a poker game. (Since that's how Dean reconized his body.)
And they hang with him for the job or something, and at some point Ash
asks about Sam, and Dean is all, oh, he's gone. Then later Lex asks
about Sammy, whether Dean avoids it or not it's up to you. Maybe he
explains a little, but not all about what happened. They kill the
thing and Ash leaves.

6th Point: One more short plot about hunting things. Maybe it's a
demon and they mention something about Sam being Demon Jesus Sammy,
maybe Bobby gets involved here. At some point Dean and Lex start
getting more obveously flirty with each other.

7th Point: Dean and Lex are getting gas and maybe Lex is outside
filling up the car while Dean is inside getting candy or pie or
something. (Prolly asking if they even HAVE pie.) And there's a tv or
newspaper or something and Dean sees a picture of Lex on there and
it's like MISSING MILLIONAIR, BLAH BLAH, CRAZY. And Dean is all ZOMG.
But gets pie and goes back to the car. Maybe he doesn't even bring it
up to Lex. Yeah, I'm thinking that'd be best.

8th Point: Killing things, blah blah.

9th Point: They're on a job and end up getting thrown in the local
jail. And maybe THIS is where Dean brings up that they're both wanted
men. They get away but it's too late, the cops already ran their
prints and Lional is hot on their trail.

10th Point: They almost get caught by Lional, get shot at much to
Dean's surprise. They get away and are now on the run.

11th Point: Maybe they head to Bobby's but he's like getting fucking
arrested because of Lex. (Like Lional looked up who the Winchesters
hang out with.) Or maybe he's just taken by Lional for (torture)
"questioning." So Lex and Dean have to spring him, but maybe Lex is
reluctant at first because he knows it would be exposing himself but
Dean is all FUCK YOU BIATCH. And maybe it looks like Lex isn't going
to come with him, so Dean goes but Lex shows up just in time to save
Dean and Bobby's asses and they all make it out. Cue hot half angry
sex between Lex and Dean.

11th 1/2 Subpoint: Dean calls Sammy and tells him about Lex and gives
him a kinda vauge idea of what's going on.

12th Point: Lex realizes that they're getting closer and closer to
getting caught so they head to Smallville to try to hide/find help.
Maybe Lex asks Clark for help and Clark ends up accidentally on
purpose betraying Lex and Dean and like Lional's men show up where Lex
and Dean are staying. (Prolly an abandoned shack in the woods.) Lex
and Dean run and Lional's men end up shooting them both, but Lex is
alive and Dean is "dead."

13th Point: Demon Sam shows and and kisses "dead" Dean and Dean gets
up. Now I'm wondering if we should do it where at first Dean thinks he
was dreaming, but then it turns out Sammy is sitting right there. OR
we could do it where he isn't and Dean has to go get Lex on his own.
For the purposes we're just gonna assume we're going with Sammy being
there. So Sam and Dean go to get Lex and end up shooting a bunch of
people. Mean while Lional is fucking with Lex's head and is gonna fry
is brain. Sam and Dean get there, whip some ass, and get Lex out of
there. Dean runs off with Lex but there should be a scene with Demon
Sammy and Lional and have it maybe where demon Sammy SCARES THE
BUGFUCK SHIT out of Lional. Omg, I could totally draw it, Sammy would
be TERRIFYING. And he'd say if Lional ever fucked with his brother
again he'd make sure Lional would die knowing what his own intestines
taisted like. (Okay, not that line exactly but you get the point...)
So Lex and Dean get out, Sam shows up breifly before being all, "EBOL
NOW GOTTA GO."

Aaaaand that's all I got. That's what I figured out so far.
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